“Lockdown is silent,
the heavy rain stabs you in the back like a trident,
These rhymes are sweet like thyme,
As much noise as a mime,
All-day in,
We don’t have a bin
I still have my chin and my shin
Wating for the day,
When I’m in Guadeloupe,
Lockdown really fun,
But there ain’t no sun,
Now I’m done.”
This was a poem I came up with for our writing activity. This epic rhyme symbolises my thoughts in
lockdown and expresses emotions artistically through writing and song.
lockdown and expresses emotions artistically through writing and song.
What I found to be challenging in this poem was trying to think of 1 of the words to rhyme with,
the rest was pretty easy.
the rest was pretty easy.
What I liked about this activity is that it was fun, in the sense that I just like rhymes and poems.
I also liked how it turned out in the end.
I also liked how it turned out in the end.
Hi I am Liam from pompallier school Kakapo class, The poem is real cool and interesting Carter. I also liked how it tells people what is feels and looks like in lockdown.
ReplyDeleteHi Carter,
ReplyDeleteWell I can tell you had fun writing this! I am not entirely sure how the middle section of your rhyme relates to lockdown - but hey it rhymes :) I am impressed with your quality caption Carter.
Mrs Gibson