Monday, 18 November 2019

Choose your own adventure



WALT: Create a choose your own adventure story revolving around our bike track at school.

This is a story Jason and I worked on, I think that the story is pretty funny if you choose certain answers, we did this as a task from Toki Pounamu. This only took a few days so don't be too harsh.

We found it challenging to try to link some slides because some are very similar, but it was challenging to think of ideas to write about.

We liked the outcome of the slides and liked how smooth it was to click through. Have a read and see what you think and put some feedback in the comments.

4 comments:

  1. Kia ora Carter this is Neha from Edmund Hillary School. I like your adventure but it ended up very sad. Besides that Keep up the good work.

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  2. Hi Carter, this is well written but there are a lot of negative things happening. Next time add more light hearted humour perhaps?

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  3. Hi there!

    My name is Matilda and I am a blog commenter for the Summer Learning Journey this year! I’ve noticed that you haven’t done any of the activities yet. Our finish date is the 24th of January but there is still time to give it a go and start gaining some points!

    What a cool idea! I didn't know you could do this on Google Slides. How did you learn?

    The Summer Learning Journey has heaps of activities to choose from! Here is the link. Have a look through and find some activities you like the looks of. I’m looking forward to seeing which ones you choose! (There are quite a few activities where you get to write stories. It would be cool to do another story like this for the Summer Learning journey!)

    https://sites.google.com/site/summerlearningjourney/weekly-activities

    Remember if you have any questions all you have to do is ask!

    Can’t wait to hear from you!

    Matilda :)

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  4. Kia ora,its Liam I like the sudden twists but to be btb it could be more kid friendly keep up the good work!

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Thank you for your positive, thoughtful, helpful comment.